短文改错:It was very nice day

2019-12-04 06:43:30

  It was very nice day on July 15th. We students were organized to have a short journey on Saturday. We took the school bus what started at 7:20 a. m About 9:30 we arrived in Beidaihe River, a very beautiful place. This is one of the famous spot in Hebei province. Many people spent their holidays there because it is cool in summer. Some are relaxing and swimming in the sea; some are laying on the beach to have the sun bath. In the morning, we swam in the sea, row small boats together, and so we had hmeh in a snack bar. In the afternoon, we walked along the beach, and arrived at Nandaihe. We took some ph,toes there. We had a good time and everyone is very excited. We returned on the bus at 4:30p.m. and got home safe and sound.

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  1. was后加a。

  2. what改为that。

  3.in 改为at。

  4.spot改为spots。

  5. spent改为spend。

  6. laying改为lying。

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  8. 去掉so。

  9. 正确。

  10. is 改为was。